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Author Name: Moderatorhnk903 5 Comments
Date Added: May 08, 2011 21:05:35 Average Score: Not Shared
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Justice too swift
They say it's all just a hoax
The wool is being pulled over our eyes
Was it really Bin Laden
Or a double in disguise
Since this was a hit
A contract you might say
Like any God father, we require proof
Then all the questions will go away
We don't care if his skull is missing pieces
Any murderer deserves death
Show us the video as he strained
 To take his last dying breath
The asshole got off easy
By being blown away
He should have been slowly tortured
Dying a little more each day
Should have kept him on life support
Untril every victim's family took their pound
Then when they were all finished
Offer them a second time around
Yes, death was no real penalty
For all those murdered at his hand
His torture and ultimate end
Should have been televised for his homeland
Maybe then they'll get the message
All of al-queda too
America will not put up with their crap anymore
If you keep it up, we'll kill you too
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Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on May 16, 2011 11:34:11 AM Report
This turned my blood cold. I'm still shivering. Very plain and clear English here. I should say American. I suspect over half the population would agree with this description of justice. Well expressed, Henry. ML (I don't think you are a son of the devil. Last time I checked we were all God's children. I may be wrong.)
Comment By: FreeWide Awake on May 12, 2011 01:07:26 PM Report


 


O full of all deceit and all fraud, you son of the devil, enemy of all righteousness, will you not cease perverting the straight ways of the Lord...ACTS 13:10

Comment By: Freemaggie lopez sherry wilbur on May 9, 2011 02:44:14 PM Report


Dearest Henry,


 I  wish I could say I agree with this anger. I empathize with it but as a christian woman can not agree with it. Murder and vigilante is murder is murder. nothing comes from revenge. not even justice. I believe  He did get off easy and I believe that his death lockes us in a constant war with al queda because he knew everything about them.  By killing him we lost our edge. I think this is a strong , heartfelt  write with alot of emotion and  thought. it is very good. always Maggie.


 

Comment By: FreeMoonStar on May 9, 2011 02:19:39 PM Report
Now THIS was a 'right on, you got it,' type of piece that many out there think on and soooo would love to do/say. I agree 100% with ya bud! A eye for an eye, pond of flesh would have been so fab for all of us out there. This should be put in frames and posted all over for others to see. For so much truth inside. 





LOVIN this write....

Moonie xx


Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on May 9, 2011 03:01:11 AM Report
Hard hitting and a great write Henry we have to assume that DNA was taken to verify it was him and not a double with the body now disposed of we have to have faith that justice has been acheived at long last, his organisation are threatening reprisals if it was'nt true why would they?~Graham.




 


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