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Author Name: Freeshortcakes25 1 Comments
Date Added: June 06, 2011 16:06:20 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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SECOND HEARTBEAT

 

SECOND HEARTBEAT ( THUMP THUMP)
 I hear you on the outside world,
crying, already afraid!
Hating , feeling your mistake!
Thump, Thump,
Please let me stay!
.........
I see you on the inside world,
feel all the worry and shame,
the burning you send,reminds me of your pain!
Thump, Thump!
Please make me the right way!
Please let me stay!
........
I feel your youth,
and hear your choices,
here in this caccoon.
A baby hyaving a baby,
oh what the world,
has to say!
Thump, Thump,
feel my heart love you!
Please let me stay!
Please out there i fear!
You won't let me stay!
..........
Hey you on the outside world,
each tear you drop,
each scream you remember,
and choke back in sobs,
I hear on the inside world!
Anger, violent rage,
I feel your need for revenge,
oh so though,
Feel the second heartbeat ,
Don't let it be a hopeless speak!
Thump , Thump,
Please,
Let me stay!
Author's Notes:
Life throws so many things our way and we don't help by hurting each other and making poor choices, so who is the one who pays for it all?
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Comment By: FreeHenry M. on June 6, 2011 05:09:02 PM Report
Maggie, this is a wonderful poem that speaks for those who can't speak for themselves. Excellent in every sense of the word!   Henry




 


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