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Author Name: Freepenfold18 7 Comments
Date Added: July 30, 2011 03:07:09 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
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Just thoughts
Words can only say so much
Yet thoughts go far beyond
No barrier inhibits
Such things that are profound
In matters that pertain to love
Or even those of faith
Can take their strength from up above
On all thats  pure and chaste
Yet those that linger can be dark
Destructive in their cause
That struggle with morality
To break all of Gods laws
Then there are those of comfort
That bring both love and hope
To those that face their darkess trials
To give them strength to cope
Yes thoughts are always with us
While awake or in our sleep
For us to share with others
Or maybe just to keep.
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Comment By: FreeFirestone Feinberg on November 13, 2011 08:45:51 PM Report
'Just thoughts' is a very original poem.  It is striking in its simple -- yet profound -- perception; and likewise in its development -- as it grows toward a fantastic finish.  BRAVO!  --David
Comment By: PremiumShirls on September 14, 2011 01:05:38 AM Report
Enjoyed reading. I am always lost in my deep thoughts.Very nice write.
Comment By: FreeKevin Dutton on July 30, 2011 05:17:32 PM Report

If a picture can say a thousand words, a single thought can acheive even more - it's getting them out that is the hard bit!


fantastic write Graham.

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on July 30, 2011 03:27:49 PM Report

With out thoughts our poems would ready pretty sad.......and without promices or depth of wisdom we learn in life...

 always your thoughts reach my heart as I read glad your back...

 Always ~ Scarlett

Comment By: FreeJim Kistner Jr on July 30, 2011 01:39:43 PM Report
Good write..thanks for sharing this. :)
Comment By: FreeTomahawk on July 30, 2011 10:18:37 AM Report
This is very true, to a great degree. I always found that deeds, not words are the real way to convey what a person articulates. Good work here, nic eflow, right to the point.
Comment By: FreeDean Lawrence on July 30, 2011 07:01:34 AM Report

great poem i like the way it flows!



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