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Author Name: FreeShe Whispers 3 Comments
Date Added: July 31, 2011 18:07:00 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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A Strangers Heart
There were lingering shadows in his guarded heart
when the silent weight of the night came
falling from his very cold sky


She opened his shirt very slowly ...
One button at a time.....
....


She looked very deeply into his lonely empty eyes
then she kissed his trembling aching heart
his surrendered lips whispered with sighs
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeTomahawk on August 1, 2011 12:30:00 AM Report
Very sultry and sensuous, blows the imagination wide open! Like I said before....you've got it goin' on!
Comment By: FreeJim Kistner Jr on July 31, 2011 07:35:54 PM Report
Short, yet you can feel the slowness in the actions..very well done
My fav line (because it's not what is expected but very descriptive)




"then she kissed his trembling aching heart"


Comment By: FreeRobert on July 31, 2011 06:41:53 PM Report
HOT! this is so full of imagened promises it boggles the mind, mine anyway Oh to be the subject of this poem!




 


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