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Author Name: FreeShe Whispers 4 Comments
Date Added: August 05, 2011 18:08:48 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Man Angel .....
Man Angel

Your untouched light smiles in the cool breeze
as it plays and dances with my Autumn hair

As your manly sighs reached my waiting lips
and whispered your eternal name in my ears

Emperor of my weakness crowning heart
What a glorious wonderment a blessing 
to find you here on the mortal side 

Procession of your alluring moon light mystic charm
and in your captivating mysterious eyes
that whisper softly with seduction

I Know .....
I will surrender within your heavenly embrace
as your feverish fire consumes my parted lips
are you my only mortal weakness 

Desire makes me weak.....
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Comment By: PremiumPhil on August 6, 2011 01:48:06 PM Report
Fantastic poem. Full of passion and want. And I also like that last line!

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on August 6, 2011 10:10:31 AM Report

Love the last line.....


Lady D

Comment By: FreeTomahawk on August 6, 2011 12:58:06 AM Report

Desire is the sweet blindness that we should all see in our lives. You are the romance queen, Scarlett!



Comment By: FreeJim Kistner Jr on August 5, 2011 11:15:20 PM Report
I agree with "Charming"...very good expression, and a lot of feeling in this write. Desire makes us all weak ...


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