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Author Name: Freeshaggy27 1 Comments
Date Added: October 14, 2011 10:10:25 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
Category: Broken Hearts Add To Favorites | Text Only

I had a dream,don't ask me when,just listen to it
A blue sky with ocean in it,dont ask me where the sun is
As i eye on a girl,who smiles at me,
she is the princess of the ocean,
A beautiful mermaid in the ocean,
she has a golden hair,with a beautiful teeth,
hey guys dont laugh,bcoz i just fall on her laugh

Her face is like the girl,to whom i always fear to face
but as it was my dream,no fear in the eyes now
with a face full of anger,she just said "No"to me

I just cant stand it,just went behind it,
she was too fast,so i couldnt stay much behind it,
for a moment she turns,with no tym to spare
Just said this to her

"for you maybe i am like a great sea snake under this ocean
but i have a large calm eyes,
which shows the love for you,like this water in the ocean
you rock in the rhythm of my heart beat
just listen to it,
oh Mermaid you are just lyk the girl in my world i see

i always wanted to write this for her
but i had no tym for her,
As i got much of responsiblity in my shoulder than her
from now on, i will not write just for her
bcoz i have my own dream,it wont just stop for her

I thought it to be the end of all,
but its not the end,its just the begining of all,
she just rushed towards me,
with the blink of eye,
she was much closer,than ever i had
with a sweet voice,
she just whispered "Good Bye".

I opened my eyes and realised
it was just an another dream.
Damn why my dream always ends so bad!!!!!!!!!!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~By Rakesh Ashokan

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Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on October 20, 2011 03:57:18 PM Report

Welcome to our site!! This is a wonderful story poem well written I must say....

 Write on ....We enjoy new poets and writers...

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