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Date Added: October 19, 2011 10:10:28 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Deeply Hidden Secretes


Deeply Hidden Secretes

Unexpectedly, something quickly dashes across

Catching her heart, in the corner of her eye

Is it the love that is too afraid to cross?

Perhaps it is just a shadow, she wonders why

She is frightened at the trust that could be lost


Does he keep dark secrets left to be disclosed,

And have a flirtatious smile as a splendid disguise?

Is he heartless and cold and can his motives be exposed?

Are her fantasies of the hope and love she’s been denied,

Hidden in the man that she ultimately chose?


With all the thoughts racing though her mind

Her eyes become tired with all the tears shed

Searching and longing for the truth to find

Yet another sleepless night, tossing in bed

She continued to be loyal but he remained blind


Does he keep secrets?

Left to be told,

Is his soul cold?

does she really want to know?


Author's Notes:

Thank you Shirls for you poem, We went with your words and idea's and together we made a great team.

Thanks Tina for writing this with me.  We make a great team!

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Comment By: FreeAngel Wings on November 7, 2011 10:30:13 PM Report
Comment By: FreeKaren on October 28, 2011 04:12:06 PM Report
Hi ! This is very good! I was also gone from this website for many years! I am glad its still here! Glad we both came back! Karen~keep on writing!
Comment By: PremiumDan J. Mazurek on October 24, 2011 06:03:22 AM Report

sad day for me and everyone else here.

one of the angels has taken flight it appears.

Comment By: FreeDean on October 19, 2011 04:09:42 PM Report
I remember I once wrote someone that angels tend to know (and recognise) each other. I guess I was right, though I didn't know this far:)!, and then, this happens! A breath taking, innovative, challenging and stimulating collaboration. Congratulations Angels.

Now, anyone dares to rise up to this?  Boys, watch out, you've been warned, and it's official:)

Well done girls, your efforts have paid off, & look forward to reading more... 

(Angelically) enjoyed it ~Dean 


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