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Author Name: FreeTomahawk 3 Comments
Date Added: October 27, 2011 00:10:13 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
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Remember....
Cold wind blows and it touches your face
You feel the intense feeling of lonely
The world races by at an incredible pace
You know, it's meant for the strong of heart, only
 
And you realize, you're alone on a field
Where emotions are bared to the world
And in your heart, you know your fate has been sealed
Your self esteem, like a rock, to be hurled
 
Oh, why does it rain?....Why does it rain?
 
Fallen heroes, strewn by the railroad tracks
Never to be acknowledged or forgotten
Love's final failings fall between the cracks
Making lust so cheap and misbegotten
 
A whisper tells you that you're ready to go
As standing armies of dead men await battle
Looking logically for a reason to show
As the downtrodden voice their death rattle
 
Oh, why does it rain?....I know why it rains
 
Remember the dreams, all those fanciful days
When sense was all that it took to survive
But as one grows and learns of more pragmatic ways
When every day is fortunate indeed, to be alive
 
Remember those souls by the railroad tracks
With no energy left at all, to go on living
Through the blood, sweat, tears and the broken backs
They paid with their lives and still kept on giving
 
Remember who you are....oh yes....remember....
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumHOPE on October 28, 2011 05:54:25 PM Report
John,  There is hope for love to enter the heart once more, after a cleaning rain.  Beautifully written.  Tina
Comment By: Freee. Gene Myers on October 27, 2011 08:59:52 PM Report
Your opening two stanzas sound like how I felt the first time I stood before an audience and read my poems.  You could not have caught the feeling any better if you had tried for a thousand years.

Nice

Gene


Comment By: FreeDirk Kruger on October 27, 2011 06:20:38 AM Report
oh no my boy , you are going serious on me - loved it






 


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