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Author Name: Premiummazurekd 4 Comments
Date Added: October 29, 2011 10:10:46 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
Category: Love Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Discovering Each Other co-write with She Whispers
Discovering ~*~ Each Other

When you discovered your love has lived on a one way street.
The times between the covers the two hearts never did meet.

 For it was not just my lips you kiss, but you uncovered my soul.
Cascading memories like a waterfall flowing with your control  

 Never did my eyes ever expect love to arrived just around the corner.
My meaningless life joined with darkness as a lone walking mourner.

A light in your eyes revealed I was walking with a tortured heart.
 For half of my life I loan myself to one very unfaithful sweetheart.  

My eyes were tired of running with tears from the staggering lies.
 Your warm embrace concealed the scars with no more one way sighs.

 

For the sweetest things on earth are to taste the lips of your love.
 Waking up wrap secured in the wings of an angel sent from above.

To see in each otherís eyes today that love has finally checked in.
Yesterdays pain left on train with a one way ticket for a has been.  

The tapestry before the eyes is a needlework woven for just two.
An intricately crafted canvas  for just two lonely hearts overdue.

The shadow of a bad love was consumed by the likes of yesterday.
The drapery of a haunting darkness has been drawn closed today.  

 

 

 

Author's Notes:
Co-write with She Whispers
this adventure started back in June of this year.
just in time for the Holidays.
Thanks India 
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on October 31, 2011 07:45:38 AM Report


Dan....Such a pleasure to write with you....

My muse has not been stabile lately or the past few months..

 This was a pleasure to write with such a gifted perfection writer..

I break all the rules when it comes to poetry ..

Thank you for your wisdom and kindness ...

 Always ~ She Whispers

Comment By: PremiumHOPE on October 31, 2011 04:04:26 AM Report
Wonderfully written and flowed together as by one super poet.  It is truly a gift to find the person who you have always loved but drift apart from.  I would add not just a gift but a miracle.  Tina
Comment By: FreeKaren on October 29, 2011 01:34:17 PM Report
cant remember how to add this to my favorites?
Comment By: FreeKaren on October 29, 2011 01:32:47 PM Report
Beautiful work. Good job to the both of you! Loved every word of this poem, haunting in its own way....perhaps because it stirred up memories of my own!




 


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