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Date Added: November 07, 2011 12:11:09 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Inspiring Birthing Rainbow


Inspiring Birthing Rainbow


Across the green luscious majestic mountainside

Giving all of us hope that continuously uplifts

The soul, Spreading itís beauty far and wide

Touched by renewed faith as Godís graces his Gifts

As we watch together heaven and earth collide


Across the sky a brilliant red hue

A Rainbow glowing for all to see

Comes optimistically, in perfect view

Flowing quickly from deep with me

As I will soon give joyful birth to you

Bringing a precious childís life to be


The orange of the sun brightly shining

Warming the earth and my heart too

My breathing is labored and I begin blowing

Living as one, now soon we will become two

The golden rays of sunshine are radiating

Like the good you will someday come to do


So after the many hours and tears of Pain

The Message God finally safely delivered

Comes the promise ensuing God's rains

The beautiful hues of the rainbow colors

The pain and hurt of birth is never felt in vein

 


Author's Notes:
Shirls words and experience I just helped a little
Thank you Tina! I appreciate your help. We make a great team.- Shirls/me

The Photo is Shirls taken May 3, 2011
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeDean on November 7, 2011 04:05:13 PM Report
Brilliantly executed, and colours perfectly go with the rainbow. As I read, came the sense that someone was pregnant, but not with a normal child, hence gave cause to this: Could somebody become pregnant with her or his emotions giving birth to a child called "love"?  If that so, then  pregnancy will become universal paving the way for many boys (young men) and men to become pregnant with their love child. And maybe it is when both pregnant lovers give birth to their love child, they will "watch together as heaven and earth collide". Brilliant line Creative Angels. Yet another great work.
Comment By: Freefjmslm on November 7, 2011 01:22:18 PM Report
Your poetic words have fullfilled the promise held in the rainbow.




 


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