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Author Name: Premiummazurekd 5 Comments
Date Added: November 09, 2011 07:11:16 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
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Rebound

 

The carnival ride is finally over
The Ferris wheel is broken down.
Everybody is always out of town.
Everly Brothers lost Cathy's Clown.

Life there has its ups and downs.
Let the clowns wear only the frowns.
 
Remove both hands from covering your eyes.
The Circus Ringleader has ceased all the rides.
For the rabbit ran off with his only magic hat.
And the old lion's voice roars like an alley cat.
 
Life here has its ups and downs.
No refunds by jumping up and down.

Life under the blue top spins all of us around.

We fall down.

Break down.
 
Melt down.
 
Burn down.
 
Shut down.
 
Words found.
 
Write it down.
 
Love's in town
 
Rebound.
Author's Notes:
To all of my inspirational support system of writers here at Creative.
Thank you
Just Me
Dan
 
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Comment By: FreeSilkinTears on November 9, 2011 10:43:59 AM Report
Wow Dan, This was great. Love never fails...rebound. Terrific.

Helen

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on November 9, 2011 09:35:40 AM Report


Goodness ......Lifes rebounds.....

 You express your self so we all can understand why

so many things change and yet nothing sometimes does not!! 

 Change is a part of life..... Sometimes its beat not to expect so much....

You always reach inside my emotions with your poems..

 ALways ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeDirk Kruger on November 9, 2011 08:40:05 AM Report
Brilliant Dan, really enjoyed it


Comment By: FreeFirestone Feinberg on November 9, 2011 08:17:28 AM Report
'REBOUND' gives me a sense of optimism -- as do many of your poems.  I like all the references to characters from other stories.  I love the way the end goes -- with the two-and-three word phrases giving way to the last 'rebound.'  Thanks for another fine poem!  --David
Comment By: PremiumHOPE on November 9, 2011 07:37:55 AM Report
Dan, this is a great finally product.  The end is a twist.  We breakdown and then loves found and it's never good to be on the rebound.  Very original and fast paced.  Tina




 


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