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Author Name: FreeDirkjk 6 Comments
Date Added: November 15, 2011 11:11:37 Average Score: (Needs 1)
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4 Sisters
They walked lazily
The 4 sisters
As we followed them
Slowly…in our jeep

I wondered
Does the sand road
Not hurt their feet

Then…one by one
They fall over
Off to sleep
It's ten past five
The sun starts to set
In this magnificent African land

Ten minutes later they wake up
Playfully
Like only big cats can
Roll on their backs
Licking their feet
Those big yellow eyes
Penetrating my mind
I so desperately
Want them to speak

One sister turn around
Goodbye my friend
Her eyes waved me a kiss
I'm sure you will never do me harm

In my mind
My soul touches
Her soft skin
You know me better than that
As I wave her a kiss back

4 big tails
Disappears
…..It's late
Time to hunt
As we turn around
To go home
Sadness grips my heart

4 sisters
4 pictures
Will remain
In my mind
forever
Every time i see
The glorius African sky
Author's Notes:
Second story of my favorite Cats - Sabi Sabi 2007 - 4 sisters - Lions
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Comment By: PremiumLinda Jo on December 19, 2011 11:46:54 PM Report


ok, its a good thing it is your anniversary because I would have missed this wonderful poem if I hadn't gone back to finish reading all of your work...into my faves!!!


 


oooh, one of your best!   you've nailed a very intriging...and intimate moment with the four sisters.   over-whelming!

Comment By: Freee. Gene Myers on November 16, 2011 06:38:13 AM Report
It is amazing to me, that such dangerous cats can have such beauty in the mind of their prey.  I can't imagine living in an area where such creatures freely walk the outskirts of my home town.  But I, like you, love them.  they truly are beautiful.  But also like you, I would never try to pet one.  Could cost a person their arm at the very least.
Gene

Comment By: PremiumDean on November 16, 2011 04:04:24 AM Report
This is great Dirk. Talking of the big cats, aren't they some magnificent creatures!
Comment By: PremiumDan J. Mazurek on November 15, 2011 04:00:33 PM Report


Well I been told we used to have a tail


You have spun one  heck of a poetic tale


of


Four Kitties

Comment By: PremiumHOPE on November 15, 2011 11:59:40 AM Report
Dirk, This I really enjoyed and will go as a fav.  Don't be so sure that you won't become the next meal.  Very sensual, is that being crazy.  Sensuality with an animal.  Not is a bad way.  I better be quiet before I get in trouble.  Tina
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on November 15, 2011 11:19:07 AM Report


What astonding poem  it makes you feel your right there....

Africa has always had it mysteriousness .. I always wanted to go there..

But I suppose I never will now..

 awesome poem my friend..

 ~ She Whispers





 


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