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Author Name: Freeshaggy27 2 Comments
Date Added: November 27, 2011 01:11:39 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
Category: Broken Hearts Add To Favorites | Text Only
Get Lost!!!!!!!!!!!
I got some cool steps
Tremble in front of her doorsteps
In this course of time
Like the moon shine
In this cloud of darkness
stars in this blackness
with the sound of breeze
i call her to hear her voice
shows no respect on me
just hold on a minute for me
i just hate this damn moment

she says "Get Lost"
And i say "Thanks a Lot"

For a while she talks nice
i feel like heaven in her voice
As she change her mood
i feel like chicken in ice
no love talks,no bad talks
As she hate such talks
Got many problem with her
low balance,low battery and all,
But still call her
not my kind of attitude
but what to do,
People just fall on her attitude
shows no sign of future in it,
still no worries for it,
just making the past memorable
with a small hope,
that she do keep some love for me

But all i get is "Get lost"
and with love i say "Thanks a lot"

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Rakesh Ashokan
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Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on March 20, 2013 11:15:51 AM Report

Some times in life we just have to move on even though it hurts like hell a heart felt poem..

..been there know how you feel!!

 Always ~ India

Comment By: PremiumHOPE on January 4, 2012 01:37:42 PM Report
Hey, it's easy for me to say, but I would say right back to her GET LOST!!!  Don't Demean yourself.  I believe a love given is not mine to take back.  I finally found to recall not the pain but "A Love Remembered"  May you as well.  Tina


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