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Author Name: Freealiopterix 3 Comments
Date Added: January 05, 2012 11:01:13 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
Category: Love/Fantasies Add To Favorites | Text Only
Transported Away

Transported Away



Kneeling facing each other

Heady eastern aroma in the air

Heavy charged atmosphere –

Aromatic oils on a warmer


We come closer and closer

In my dreams and right here

I run my fingers through your hair

Prepare to massage you all over


Slowly I apply the scented oils

Then I massage your neck and

Head south ending up at your feet


Your body’s silhouette glows in the dark

You apply oils to me in turn

I am transported away in joy

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Comment By: FreeFirestone Feinberg on January 5, 2012 03:19:09 PM Report
Not to be unduly practical:  but how do you get all that oil off your sheets? -- not to mention your selves!  --David
Comment By: FreeDean on January 5, 2012 03:00:43 PM Report
Now here is your challenge Alistair: Write rest of the poem, and tell us what happened or is still happening where you've been transported to.
Hint: Must be very smooth, as you are quite oily :-)


Comment By: FreeDirk Kruger on January 5, 2012 12:09:07 PM Report
is that naughty or what, nice poem Alistair


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