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Author Name: Freepoematic 4 Comments
Date Added: January 10, 2012 17:01:42 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
Category: Love/Romance Add To Favorites | Text Only
Want To Kiss You

Want To Kiss You

(Inspired by,  ‘Well, I Am Doing It Now’  by: Dirk Kruger)


I want to kiss you -- and
let you dream about the land -- that
would have made the kiss possible.


I want to kiss you -- and
let you dream about an island -- that
would have been embraced by --
the ocean of my heart -- to
join yours by invitation of --
that kiss, never happened! but -- it
was possible.


I want to hold you -- and
let you dream about-- the
gentle touch of frost -- on
that land, never saw light! but -- it
did exist.


The kiss -- that
would have let the sun -- shine on land,
frost would have melted -- before
was even formed -- and
Us --
would have performed -- the
magic show,
by swirl of a wand -, from the passion
-- full.


Author's Notes:

A continuation to my previous post ‘A journey --- With A-No-Taker’, while I was in that mood, I read Dirk’s brilliant romance & the inspiration was instantaneous. 

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Comment By: FreeLewis on January 11, 2012 08:22:21 AM Report

Wow very good read,


Comment By: PremiumFirestone Feinberg on January 11, 2012 03:57:37 AM Report
Well that's one heck of a poem, sir!  Hats off to Dirk and you!  Great writing -- especially the cadence: wow!  --David
Comment By: FreeDirk Kruger on January 11, 2012 02:10:03 AM Report
wow my boy, that's very good, we will make this a romantic week, well done have enjoyed it a lot

Comment By: PremiumDan J. Mazurek on January 10, 2012 06:05:55 PM Report

Well your two  hearts and writings  definitely have found the right place.

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