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Author Name: Freealiopterix 3 Comments
Date Added: January 18, 2012 12:01:55 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
Category: Inspirational Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Nirvana

Nirvana

 

Total Darkness – the only sound the

Collective hush of sixteen-thousand

Fans – a sharp whistle from the crowd

A distant hum – bass vibrating through

 

Your whole body giving you the biggest

Buzz – Lasers blast out into your eyes then

Above then off – chord - - G minor seventh

On the synthesiser – the crowd as one rise up

 

Arms aloft -- the over-whelming collective pure

Joy thundering through your body – rise up as one

To herald the beginning of ‘Shine on You Crazy Diamond’

Head spinning no doubt passive inhalation from the strange

 

Cigarettes the men in front are smoking – The first chord

Assaults the eardrums threatening to burst

Them – sound quality quadraphonic

Clean and driving – bass

 

Pounding – waves of pure emotion push you

Nearly to tears you have truly reached Nirvana

Author's Notes:
My first Pink Floyd concert....
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeFirestone Feinberg on January 19, 2012 06:09:16 AM Report
I'm a little too old for PF -- but you certainly can put words to music, what? --David
Comment By: FreeDirk Kruger on January 19, 2012 01:53:26 AM Report
SHINE ON YOU CRAZY DIAMOND IS A BRILLIANT SONG, GREAT POEM, GREAT BAND, GREAT DAY....OK ENOUGH OF THAT , ENJOYED THE POEM


Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on January 18, 2012 07:01:57 PM Report
Never went to one heard there great!!!




 


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