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Writing Group: Ammar and David 5 Comments
Date Added: January 28, 2012 14:01:44 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
Category: Inspirational Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
IF EVER COULD WE STAND SO TALL


If Ever Could We Stand So Tall


If ever could we stand so tall,
To gaze beyond those towering walls,
And see so clearly distant lands,
How well would then we understand
When looking far beyond the names:
The scenes of Life are everywhere the same.

If ever we could hear so well
The faint resounding of the bells
Whose ringing barely touch our ears
How perfectly we'd know -- so clear --
What music lie beneath refrains:
The sounds of Life are everywhere the same.

If could we e'er unveil our hearts,
And so cause hatred to depart,
End wars and battles -- petty rows,
To give ourselves a chance to grow --
And so allow the world to change:
The love of Life is everywhere the same.
The love of Life is everywhere the same.



Author's Notes:
A collaborative effort between FirestoneFeinberg and Ammar. We hope you enjoy reading it, as much as we enjoyed writing it together.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeJoshua M on November 14, 2013 03:26:39 AM Report
Inspiring and powerful. Both should be proud, now if only the world knew the wisdom of your words ... 
Comment By: FreeDean on January 28, 2012 08:48:27 PM Report
Congratulations to both, a wonderful inspirational piece. Yes, indeed, "the sound of life and the love of life are everywhere the same" , beautifully put. --  However,  the chances,  the expectations,  the fairness  and  the hopes , aren't. enjoyed it, ~Dean
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on January 28, 2012 07:00:15 PM Report
You two write very well together I do hope there will be more... two different minds as one....
Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on January 28, 2012 03:39:34 PM Report


...very well stated!  into my faves!!


 


loved every line.  wonderful collaboration, and stitched together seamlessly!  last stanza was my favorite...and I too believe!

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on January 28, 2012 02:23:36 PM Report
Lovely write; and inspirational is surely the correct category.  I DID enjoy.  



Lady D





 


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