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Author Name: Premiummazurekd 8 Comments
Date Added: January 19, 2021 15:01:43 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
Category: Observances/Valentine's Day Add To Favorites | Text Only
Be Mine

Be Mine

Standing here alone upon the shores of time.
A wishing star heard:"Will she really be mine?"
The moon wears a grey mask of clouds today.
Yet moving waves of love effortlessly my way.
The air can be a little thin floating up in the clouds.
Good to see that the old silver lining is still around.
Love from the past ran fast like sand thru the fingers.
Her scent from last night's embraced even still lingers.
That healing hug sent sensations thru out the heart.
A simple gift from heaven that the stars can't chart.
Timely and so surreal was that twinkling we shared.
It's one chance of a lifetime to build with such care.
So I assemble all the sands of time.
To erect a statue of true love divine.
The sublime beauty of that balmy night.
Reveals an image with wondrous delight.
With the next rising of another morning's sun rays cast.
Washes away the shadows from the regrets of the past.
A tidal wave of love for her is now burning at the stake.
I've been swept away by one that ended the heart ache.


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Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on January 30, 2021 01:06:17 PM Report

Oh yes, a "twinkling" indeed. Your words are filled with affection. Love inspires!


~Barbara D.

Comment By: PremiumDKO on October 15, 2012 08:42:27 PM Report
Love this! It had everything.... The flow... the vision... and the emotion 
Comment By: FreeAminath Neena on April 13, 2012 12:17:41 PM Report
Such a captivating write......really sweet!
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on February 14, 2012 08:46:55 PM Report


 A very beautiful poem for a beautiful lady who has captured your heart

I know she will enjoy and love reading it!! Wishing you both happiness...

 Always ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeTomahawk on February 13, 2012 10:20:04 PM Report

Dan the Man, you hit a home run with this one, bud. Very nicely written, poignant and heartfelt, Isalute you.



Comment By: FreeFirestone Feinberg on February 13, 2012 07:57:57 PM Report
This is such a wonderful and love-filled Valentine! I know Sherrie will love it!  You are a good man! --David
Comment By: FreeFirestone Feinberg on February 13, 2012 07:57:57 PM Report
This is such a wonderful and love-filled Valentine! I know Sherrie will love it!  You are a good man! --David
Comment By: FreeAlistair Muir on February 13, 2012 07:15:15 PM Report
What a beautiful write -- such effortless flow and rhyme -- a sentimental jewel



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