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Date Added: February 26, 2012 15:02:21 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Hi Ya


Hi Ya

The war is never really over

The battles are never truly one

A person struggles to find closure

The fight has only just begun

The mind tries to hide a person's self worth

Becoming a menacing presence to one's soul

Leading itself to criticism undeserved

Now self-confidence loosing it's stronghold

It's time to gather every mercenaries

Who's stealth and loyalty have proven true

Always acting in perfect synergy

Complete with faultless honor and virtue 

The conflict to be waged

Is not found on any battlefield

But has been secretly staged

On the emotions we carefully sealed

The fear and pain we have been dealt

Emerges over and over again

It's charpness and intensity, always felt

Longing for peace, harmony and Zen


The torn and withered heart made a stand

Driving the ninja force out from deep within

Gathering an untouchable fighting band

Releasing the soul once languishing


The woman you see before you

Is stronger than any earthly man

Who has lessened her inner value

In this battle she has made a stand


.....For it has been won with a single chop of her hand!!!


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Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on March 13, 2012 05:20:53 PM Report
I applaud you for taking the path of self discovery and self esteem. We should never let other people define who we are. Life is way to short...Great write, kid...len

Comment By: Freee. Gene Myers on February 27, 2012 10:49:13 AM Report

Love it.  No one, man or woman, should be made to feel like they are less than they perceive themselves to be.

No person has the right to put another down in seriousness.

Fight back with all you have.  You deserve the respect.

You've earned it just by living.


Comment By: FreeFirestone Feinberg on February 27, 2012 08:56:24 AM Report
Comment By: FreeHenry M. on February 26, 2012 08:00:47 PM Report
Sounds to me like you have both faced your enemies and come out victorious! Great writing ladies, keep them going!   Hugs,   Henry
Comment By: FreeDean on February 26, 2012 07:11:20 PM Report
I love the solidarity between two Ninjas. Way to go girls.... wish you all the best... ~Dean

PS. Use the swords carefully please :-)

Comment By: FreeTomahawk on February 26, 2012 05:26:12 PM Report

Sun Tsu once said: "If superior to your adversary, destroy....if equally matched, fight....if inferior, back up and re-evaluate." Fear no one, respect all....




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