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Author Name: Freealiopterix 4 Comments
Date Added: February 27, 2012 11:02:45 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
Category: Topic Of The Week/Nothing Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
I Feel Not A Thing



Nothing



My tears fall like rain

Lord please hear my pain

I have not plenty

My soul is empty

I feel not a thing:

Nothing.




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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumDan J. Mazurek on February 28, 2012 06:40:59 PM Report


nothing gives us something to do in life


and here nothing is our  words to write

Comment By: FreeFirestone Feinberg on February 27, 2012 08:19:36 PM Report
You feel nothing: but we feel very much for you -- and Love it is!  --Sir David, Lord Chamberlain
Comment By: FreeDean on February 27, 2012 05:32:12 PM Report
Well Alistair, this is a difficult one, I mean philosophically. Simply I should say, you would not write this if you felt nothing! So there is a degree of feeling for everything, even we might like see it as void! A terrific read, ~Dean
Comment By: PremiumHOPE on February 27, 2012 04:34:29 PM Report
Alistair
I spent years feeling nothing, but in reality it wasn't nothing it was pain.  The emptiness seems to suck a soul out of that their is.  But you are there, love exists, life exists.  I hope you fill that that void, or what seems to be a void with a sweet little bird or a lovely flower to remind yourself you are not empty it just feels that way. A wonderful poem.

Love

Tina





 


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