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Author Name: Freepenfold18 5 Comments
Date Added: March 10, 2012 04:03:36 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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FANTASY
The daylight passes into night
And though I see there is no sight
Release the hold of reality
To drift in dreams of Fantasy
  
For what is light without its touch
To live in dreams, a poor mans crutch
A fantasy that floats in vain
Is all but shadows and pools of pain.
  
The light still flickers on the wall
No warmth or colour, a shape thats all
Yet still it claims to draw my gaze
As reality then ebbs and fades.
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Comment By: Freee. Gene Myers on March 11, 2012 05:18:51 PM Report
Sometimes I feel like my dreams are more of a reality than reality itself.  Dreams are real so long as you sleep, but when you awaken, you must deal with the rigors of true life.  I think I'll stick with the rigors of reality.  That way I get to keep my eyes open.
Love the flow in the poem ... and ... the poem itself.

Gene

Comment By: Freee. Gene Myers on March 11, 2012 05:18:50 PM Report
Sometimes I feel like my dreams are more of a reality than reality itself.  Dreams are real so long as you sleep, but when you awaken, you must deal with the rigors of true life.  I think I'll stick with the rigors of reality.  That way I get to keep my eyes open.
Love the flow in the poem ... and ... the poem itself.

Gene

Comment By: FreeAlistair Muir on March 11, 2012 06:13:58 AM Report
I love the fantasy world and the release from the constraints of reality...but I wouldn't want to live there.  Your poem is beautiful and reads so effortlessly -- a splendid write



Alistair

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on March 10, 2012 07:27:50 PM Report


Oh how the shadows speak out....Without dreams or fantasy it would be a dull world!!!

 You always touch my heart with your truths and passion for life!!

Thank you for all your kind comments on my poems lately....

 Love ~ Scarlett

Comment By: FreeFirestone Feinberg on March 10, 2012 10:16:06 AM Report
Without imagination, without fantasy -- living would be almost intolerable.  We need the magic as much as we need the air.  Cool poem -- I dig it.  --David




 


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