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Author Name: Premiummazurekd 6 Comments
Date Added: April 11, 2012 11:04:22 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
Category: Love/Fantasies Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Saturated Dreams
To be awakened from a panoramic dream.
Where I time travel to where wishes will be.
 
 
You weren't an illusion while others pretend.
I close my eyes nightly is where I am penned.
 
 
Reality will yield to the hearts right of way.
As that dreamscape has passage every day.
 
 
No one dares to enter in or come between.
I am a spectator of the clouds silver screen.
 
Love beyond dreams will eventually be freed. 
I can picture now what we were meant to be.
Author's Notes:
an old poem needing  some closure
  saturated is color chromatically pure; not diluted with white or gray or black .
to find love that isn't in the grey zone is awesome at least in our dreams..
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Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on April 12, 2012 07:16:24 AM Report


We all must dream it gives us hope and courage to push forward....

 Love wears many painted faces..... I can relate to the depth of emotions  here....

 Your awesome......

 Always ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeTomahawk on April 11, 2012 11:41:20 PM Report


Dreams are the XYZ  coordinates of our existence. Without dreams, without hope, we go into a kind of psychological gimbal lock. Nice work, Dan, way to keep flying straight up.


 


Len

Comment By: FreeFirestone Feinberg on April 11, 2012 10:30:12 AM Report
Dreams make us human.  They allow us to cope with This...  let us ever celebrate them!  Cool poem, Dan...  --David
Comment By: FreeAlistair Muir on April 11, 2012 07:24:12 AM Report
Such a dramatic piece of lyrical beauty -- just reading it is a joyous passage through where and what if?  A quality write Dan -- bravo!



Alistair4

Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on April 11, 2012 03:58:55 AM Report
Dreams are and always will be the inspiration for the romantic and the poet and maybe its just as well as they rarely live up to the reality of the real world,that said where would we be without them?another wonderful write Dan and as always a pleasure to read~Graham.
Comment By: FreeDean on April 10, 2012 09:02:39 PM Report
Nicely done Dan. I think we're allowed to dream beyond our dreams, in our dreams ! ~Dean




 


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