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Author Name: Premiummazurekd 6 Comments
Date Added: April 26, 2012 07:04:20 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
Category: Love Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Love's Finest Moment

Did you ever have a feeling
you wish it would forever stay?

But you were always the one
to bury them far away.

You rather live inside four walls
as the heart harden like clay.

The view at times was livable
after taking time to pray.

Now your heart is racing and
not from pacing the  floor.
 
For passion is no longer waiting
behind a hush-hush door.

The walls of your heart are falling
as the past is swept away.

For a trap door had opened
where a heart had secretly stayed.

Love escaped in one heart beat
and not to be sealed away.
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Comments:
Comment By: Freeleahlopez on July 26, 2013 02:16:17 PM Report

Enjoyed thoroughly, great dedication

 

MITZEE

Comment By: FreeDean on April 28, 2012 04:10:48 AM Report
There is something magical in each and every line.....

Loved it to 'Love's finest moment' , ~Dean

Comment By: FreeFirestone Feinberg on April 14, 2012 09:57:02 AM Report
A panorama of the soul and the heart.  A view of the irony of life.  A masterpiece.  --David
Comment By: FreeAlistair Muir on April 14, 2012 06:50:28 AM Report
The writing of this piece -- the flow and use of language - - the rhyme scheme -- is a joy in itself but importantly -- it moves... This is such a fine piece of writing...



Alistair

Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on April 14, 2012 05:29:17 AM Report
I once tried to explain to a friend the difference between loving someone and being in love, that head over heels, mad rush that throws common sense out the window and doing stupid things because your hormones are going crazy and then theres loving someone who over the years gives that warm feeling when you hold them in your arms at the end of a long day sharing good times and bad having compassion respect and trust for each other that become the building blocks and the foundation of your lives together, this kind of reminded me of that Dan,excellent poem my friend~Graham.
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on April 13, 2012 07:10:45 PM Report


Thank you for posting this wonderful poem it explains so well our emotions

concerning love especially after heartaches....I know I guard my heart now more carefully....

 I so enjoy your love poems...Sounds like a man in love again....

 Always ~ She Whispers





 


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