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Comment By:  Javeria on October 22, 2012 01:16:46 PM |
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So well expressed you are just amazing poet..I really enjoy your style....
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| Comment By: ken on October 21, 2012 08:54:04 PM |
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integrity contemplates the truth and knows when to stand
and empathy tells us how.
peace
ken
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| Comment By: Henry M. on June 13, 2012 04:33:05 PM |
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Sometimes feelings spiral to a point where they are hard to control and taking a step back is the prudent thing to do. Great writing Kym. Henry
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Comment By:  Merv on June 4, 2012 04:00:24 AM |
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Very well done. As I read this the words seemed to draw me into your thoughts
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| Comment By: Leonard Wilson on May 10, 2012 03:19:42 PM |
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Well-penned, kid....I know there's a story behind this write...len
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| Comment By: Ammar Saleem Butt on May 8, 2012 11:14:46 AM |
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Awesome! You penned a very difficult situation in a very beautiful way. I would like to read it again.
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| Comment By: She Whispers on May 4, 2012 03:58:23 PM |
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Welcome to our site!! A very powerful poem reminds me of someone else....
You write very well my dear... (( Smilessss
~ She Whispers
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| Comment By: Dan J. Mazurek on May 4, 2012 02:24:55 PM |
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Powerful thing to do.
What is right for you
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| Comment By: Tomahawk on May 4, 2012 12:00:07 PM |
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It's really tragic and it hurts bad, when you have to say goodbye to someone whom you cared for so much....for the "greater good". Very poignant and sad, but well done, Anna. Welcome to CP.
Len
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| Comment By: Firestone Feinberg on May 3, 2012 10:04:43 AM |
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A sensitive and succinct poem that tells of much more than its wonderful twelve lines admit. --David
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| Comment By: Alistair Muir on May 3, 2012 06:40:56 AM |
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Beautifully written with a wonderfully easy and fluent pace and rhyme -- lovely work --
Alistair
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| Comment By: Joe McNinney on May 1, 2012 10:01:44 AM |
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I guess I was being selfish. Seeing you go through this crap and me not being able to help, stings.
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| Comment By: Talal Bajwa on May 1, 2012 02:27:54 AM |
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Great one. One that so many people can relate to, yet to each person will be a very specific event in their lives which they will relate it with. Even though it's general, it feels like a personal one to me. Amazing.
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