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Author Name: FreeByronBabe 8 Comments
Date Added: May 11, 2012 05:05:48 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
Category: Love/Romance Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Cabin For Two

In a little cabin built for two

shut out the world, but me and you

Wind soughing through the pines

lifting the aroma from honeysuckle vines


A glass of wine by the fireplace

along my arm your fingers trace

My eyes give my intentions away

it becomes hard to keep our feelings at bay


In the glow of the waning fire

we can feel the heat of rising desire

How long can we keep control

without surrendering our soul


I give in and make the first move 

You respond, we get into a groove 

We make love all through the night 

Awake together, at dawn's first light

Author's Notes:
Thank you Joe for all the help it was fun!

My words are purple, Joe's are blue.
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Comments:
Comment By: ModeratorHenry M. on June 13, 2012 04:29:19 PM Report
A very warming, sensual piece done with utmost class and grace. Excellent writing Kym.    Henry
Comment By: PremiumMerv on June 5, 2012 01:46:12 PM Report

There are many ways to express thoughts of love and love making  and you two have expressed those views in a terriic way

Hmmmm

What more can one say

 



 

 




Comment By: PremiumMerv on June 5, 2012 01:39:30 PM Report

wonderful view of just that.

Hmmmm

What more can I say

MervThere are so many ways to express thoughts of love and making love you two have put together a

Comment By: FreeSaeed Alavi on May 21, 2012 06:36:32 PM Report
I really...really loved the descriptive situation you created on an old fashioned subject of making love, Specially the first stanza was LOVELY... I read that like 10 times;)
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on May 20, 2012 01:04:16 AM Report
The oldest story of lust ever told. but done so well.....Hot, Hot....Hot!!!...len
Comment By: PremiumDan J. Mazurek on May 16, 2012 05:33:19 PM Report


You rock me all night long .

Came to me from a song.


Probably before your time


This poem has it all in rhyme.


keep in coming i see a book in the making

Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on May 11, 2012 09:23:43 AM Report
Hey Lady, morning!  Love this and thank you...........
Comment By: FreeTomahawk on May 11, 2012 07:29:42 AM Report


I agree with Billy Robert, this was an amazing piece of sensual serendipidy. Well done, you're very talented.


 


Len





 


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