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Writing Group: Ammar and David 7 Comments
Date Added: May 20, 2012 15:05:25 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
Category: Philosophy Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
WE WALK LIKE GHOSTS IN EMPTY HALLS
WE WALK LIKE GHOSTS IN EMPTY HALLS

We walk like ghosts in empty halls, 
We lock the doors and hide the keys  
Allow no sunshine, rain, nor breeze  
To pass through our windowless walls.
 
And all but silent spend our days, 
Lest face our fear to be without  
No laugh, no tear, no sigh, nor shout  
Be heard within our lightless caves.
 
And though pretend we're satisfied 
With our selfish doctrines, demands, 
Our souls take us to distant lands; 
Dare us to learn, and cease to hide
 
Embrace new colours, rhythms, themes  
And give ourselves a chance to grow  
The gentle, guiding winds to blow
That we might live our secret dreams.


Author's Notes:
A collaboration of FirestoneFeinberg and Ammar. Hope you enjoy our work.
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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on June 27, 2012 11:09:34 AM Report
Terrific piece of writing you two. I love it!
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on June 4, 2012 03:16:39 PM Report
To me, this is a messge to live each day to the fullest. Great work, you two...len
Comment By: FreeKelly on May 22, 2012 06:02:13 PM Report
This is great- absolutely love it. It reminds me of something similar to the work of Auden- finding the light within the darkness.



Excellent,




kelly

Comment By: FreeKelly on May 22, 2012 05:59:39 PM Report


Comment By: FreeKymberly Donn on May 21, 2012 03:52:27 PM Report
This is poetry at it's finest! Simply stunning guys!



Anna

Comment By: FreeHenry M. on May 21, 2012 10:47:27 AM Report
Wow! This is great, what a grand collaboration you have crafted. Excellent Animar and David.    Henry
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on May 19, 2012 10:28:52 AM Report
Guys:  great write.  I did enjoy.   



Lady D





 


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