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Author Name: Freeshaggy27 1 Comments
Date Added: June 15, 2012 05:06:23 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
Category: Dedications Add To Favorites | Text Only
Straight Hair Girl

In my world, just besides me
straight hairs, bright eyes.
All the boys fall,
underneath crushed their plans
and my eyes,
stares only her all time.
Lonely nights, keeps
smoking all times, all times

And I keep staring her,
sweetest rhyme of life.
It's a straight hair girl,
just a straight hair girl......

Your dress,
like white queen in Alice of wonderland
Your eyes,
like black Perl in the ocean of life.
You made me strong,
while I was feeling weak to write
back long time, you look at me,
my eyes, playing hide and seek.

And I keep staring her,
sweetest rhyme of life.
It's a straight hair girl,
just a straight hair girl……..

Other boys, with their wild eyes,
watch her all time.
Their evil thoughts,
brings bad dreams to her all night.
I wish, to be part of her life,
good dreams, be in rest of her life.

But I keep staring her,
sweetest rhyme of life
It's a straight hair girl,
just a straight hair girl.

Author's Notes:
its fun to stay even late hours in office,if there is a beautiful girl to sit beside!!!! 
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Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on July 6, 2012 11:01:28 AM Report

This is beautiful... No wonder you want to work late!!

Awesome poem ~

Always ~ She Whispers


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