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Author Name: Premiumsheedreams 6 Comments
Date Added: October 08, 2012 12:10:36 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
Category: General/Word Banks Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
wasabi green...WBC #6
who but a fool maiden
would dance in your dreams
allow herself to be manipulated
a puppet on a string
 
your pseudo-calm surface
is a sly mean disguise
like a clown's wicked smile
hiding murder in his eyes
 
wasabi green is the faded color
of purple and blue
while changing from a prince
to a monster like you
 
your game was to fly
the experimental aircraft
but it wastes in the hanger
as your grown children laugh
 
words can cause bruises
that reach deep inside
on your knees beg for mercy
for tears they have cried
 
Author's Notes:
a sad but true story of a man who tried to control his wife and children through verbal abuse.  He lost everything...his friends, his family but worst of all he doesnt know how to change.  He still thinks everyone else is wrong.
 
thanks Pamela, yes it still needs some work.  I like your suggestions.
 
word bank words:  fool     clown     prince     maid     dance    fly     try     dream     fine     sly     calm     green
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Comments:
Comment By: Freeken on October 9, 2012 08:40:54 PM Report
I understand this all too well:

I live in an apartment building and for too long I had to listen to the man upstairs scream at his family - wife, children, grand-children no one was safe from his trinity, day after day; I cannot understand accepting such behavior; I am just glad they have a moved away.





heart breaking



ken


Comment By: FreeAdri on October 9, 2012 02:38:21 AM Report
Very sad, but so true every day. Greatly illustrated LJ, well written and beautifully executed. 
Brilliant 

Adri 

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on October 8, 2012 06:29:38 PM Report


You have spoken out loud and clear... I have known men just like this its only their insecurit

 They must have complete control.... Very well written!! Hugs ~ India

Comment By: PremiumHarry William Harborne on October 8, 2012 04:58:13 PM Report
I was most impressed with this work, had I not know I would not have guessed it was a WBC. Bill H
Comment By: FreeFirestone Feinberg on October 8, 2012 01:41:56 PM Report
I'm not too sure I really understand this special poem; I'm glad you explained it.  You really used the words well.  This is a poem I need to read again and again.  That's a good thing.  It draws the attention.  Thanks for contributing such a fine gift to my word bank! --David
Comment By: FreeTomahawk on October 8, 2012 12:22:32 PM Report


A very interesting interpretation of a true event. Nice work, Ljo.


 


Len





 


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