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Author Name: FreeByronBabe 10 Comments
Date Added: July 07, 2012 23:07:11 Average Score: (Needs 1)
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Type: Rhyming
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Beat of A Poetic Mind

I thought to dance upon your page

move to whatever rhythm Id find

romance, angst, peace or rage 

raw and edgy, smooth and refined


A symphony of worded passion

rising to a crescendo of feeling

a cymbal crash the culmination

leaves your dancers reeling


Came upon some back street blues

interlude of emotional free fall

you listened well to that muse

your tune held dancers in thrall


Mother Nature shared her melody

a calming tune for sheltered souls

aspiring to become a rhapsody

giving your dancers back control


The unforgiving crush of metal

ensconces nerve endings with fire

continuous stinging of nettle

dancers for you ready to retire


So my dance comes to a close

the cadence you designed

the beautiful songs you compose

ah the beat of a poetic mind

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Comments:
Comment By: Freeken on October 5, 2012 07:18:25 PM Report
It is most certainly a dance deciphering the innuendos of a writer's mind but there in lies the fun and the intrigue.

a wonderful portrait you have offered.



ken


Comment By: FreeChuck on August 23, 2012 02:33:14 AM Report
We all dance to the beat of our own drum...some of us better than others...and no one really hears the same song even if their tuned into the same station...i just write what I'm hearing in my head mostly...im pretty sure they aren't even my songs...i really like this one...poems about poems are awesome.
Comment By: FreePamela A. Lamppa on August 1, 2012 11:59:04 PM Report
Nice rhyme with fairly good meter and flow.  The beat of a poetic mind will never cease to make me ponder just what goes on in there. But then - that's what writers do.  ~Pamela
Comment By: PremiumDan J. Mazurek on July 23, 2012 06:24:07 PM Report


A dance to words spun to hold closely and dearly to ones heart.

When a feeling taps the heart to dance with another part(ner) 


The dancing queen

with her poetry

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on July 14, 2012 05:20:58 PM Report
I give it a 98, 'cause it had a good beat and great to think too. :o)...Just lovely, niece...len
Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on July 9, 2012 04:09:56 PM Report
An instant fav Kym, amazing piece of writing......
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on July 8, 2012 09:41:28 AM Report
This sends its own message I do like this..... Your really a wonderful poet!!
Comment By: FreeFirestone Feinberg on July 8, 2012 09:37:30 AM Report
An etude in excellence.  Rhyme --when subtle -- like this -- thrills me.  It is indeed music.  As someone said: Play on!  --David
Comment By: PremiumHarry William Harborne on July 8, 2012 07:49:24 AM Report




A cornucopia of rhyming words, a plethora of rhythm style and meter, superb in every way. I love rhyme well done.



Bill Harborne


Comment By: FreeTomahawk on July 8, 2012 07:43:36 AM Report


The power of words can be more exacting than physical endeavours, sometimes. Excellent work, Kym.


 


Len





 


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