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Author Name: Premiummazurekd 8 Comments
Date Added: July 12, 2012 19:07:09 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
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The Flip Side of Me
If I wish upon a star.
The star would say:
Who brightens your day?
Your eyes are dazzled beholding her.
No need for any new desires up here.

If I rub a rabbit's foot.
The foot would say:
Why stroke for lady luck today?
Your feet with her better stay put.
No need to carry an old furry foot.

If I hang up a horseshoe.
The shoe would say:
Where is good fortunes fate today?
Your heart with her is first of all.
No need for a charm on the wall.

If I toss a coin down a wishing well.
The well would say:
When is a penny dropped from heaven?
Your angel left one for you to find.
No need to squander even a dime.

If I ask God with no words to pray.
God would mysteriously say:
What are tears for in heaven today?
Your world is perfect because of her.
No need for crying I am lonely here.
                           
Author's Notes:
i don't know what this is
maybe  just a rambling poet.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeMaya on August 26, 2014 06:02:17 AM Report
the last line really hit me (though I was smiling a little at first) very introspective piece here Dan. 

Comment By: PremiumHarry William Harborne on July 15, 2012 07:23:10 AM Report


A strong message here, enjoy the grass you have because it is not usualy any greener elsewhere. Much enjoyed.


 


Bill Harborne.

Comment By: Freejakemcqueen on July 14, 2012 12:37:58 PM Report
Ramble on, enjoyed sharing it with you.
Comment By: FreeAlistair Muir on July 14, 2012 12:31:52 AM Report
Your 'rambling' is majesty in that beauty of language can create such joy for a reader -- the ease you demonstrate in writing never fails to impress -- I loved this piece as I do all your exceptional work...



Alistair

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on July 13, 2012 05:32:21 PM Report


 As poets we write what we feel or expreiance..... Ramble I think not...we know what were saying and writing always a pleasure to read... YOur comments are so kind and I thank you so much

...Love ya! ~ India

Comment By: FreeKymberly Donn on July 13, 2012 12:58:18 PM Report
Ramblig poets are some of my favorite kinds of poets! Superlative Dan



~KD~

Comment By: FreeFirestone Feinberg on July 13, 2012 12:12:41 PM Report
Great!  Superlative!  Perfect composition.  A song of songs.  --David
Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on July 13, 2012 03:40:34 AM Report
Just a rambling poet Dan? I think not, a very honest down to earth peoples kind of poet more like, you know where family morals lay and speak from the heart anyone who reads your work knows that,as always a pleasure to read and enjoy~Graham.




 


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