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Author Name: Premiummazurekd 9 Comments
Date Added: July 17, 2012 17:07:53 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
Category: Broken Hearts Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Letting Go
I been having a conversation
between the heart and brain.
  
I think the two of them have
finally declared a truce.
  
At least for
right now.
 
So I went outside with my beach ball
to play catch with the wind.
 
 For at least the wind knows
where it is going.
 
So I let go
of
everything.
  
To catch
the wind.
 
  The white side
then said:
"I see I belong to
the clouds.
  
The blue side
then said:
"I see I belong to
the sky.
 
The green side
then said:
"I see I belong to
the grass below.
 
The red side
hesitantly said:
"I see I belong to
a sea of
broken hearts.
Author's Notes:
I just thought I would try something
else so totally
different.
But not so deep
or high to reach.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeMoonStar on August 8, 2012 03:19:13 AM Report
Ahhhhh hear that? That is  clapping and a soft sigh.. Love the way you branched out. You always bring something to the front that makes us think, ponder on and then toss around for all views. I so like how you managed to try your hand at something so un-like you and bring forth a true winner.



Way to go amigo!



Moonie xo


Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on July 20, 2012 06:12:17 AM Report


This is different for you but we all have to branch out and try new styles...

I love it a great message of emotions... Hugs ~ India

Comment By: Freejakemcqueen on July 19, 2012 03:27:49 PM Report
Nice!
Comment By: FreeTim on July 18, 2012 09:01:52 PM Report

For at least the wind knows where it is going is a great line. There is a lot to think about here. A fine poem.

Comment By: FreeFirestone Feinberg on July 18, 2012 05:04:41 PM Report
It is a pleasure to see you branch out in to an entirely new thing.  I really enjoyed reading this poem.  It is light and easy-going and interesting and fine.  --David
Comment By: FreeKymberly Donn on July 18, 2012 04:59:28 PM Report
It is different, but that just makes it unique. I like the feel of this Dan, well done!



~KD~

Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on July 18, 2012 02:30:40 AM Report
Well its different Dan but feels effectively wholesome somehow, like coming home to a warm welcome maybe thats the colours? anyway much enjoyed my friend~Graham.
Comment By: FreePamela A. Lamppa on July 17, 2012 11:32:34 PM Report
The white side to the clouds, the blue to the sky, the green to the grass and the red to a sea of broken hearts.  Much food for thought in this soft and colorful verse.  I enjoyed this very much.  ~Pamela
Comment By: FreePamela A. Lamppa on July 17, 2012 09:15:36 PM Report
The white side to the clouds, the blue to the sky, the green to the grass and the red to a sea of broken hearts.  Much food for thought in this soft and colorful verse.  I enjoyed this very much.  ~Pamela




 


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