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Author Name: FreeShe Whispers 4 Comments
Date Added: August 12, 2012 21:08:01 Average Score: (Needs 1)
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Type: Rhyming
Category: Love/Fantasies Add To Favorites | Text Only
She Was Alluring
Why are you so drawn to her in such
a strange seductive way

Can your heart explain how she kisses you
each stirring night and whispering way

Take warning, she is far different from what
you suppose, she moves slowly like a clinging
mist that covers your trembling skin
your sweaty and also your clothes

Enticing beauty is the sleeper in your waiting
soul, like spinning dope in your  hungry veins
you don't want to ever let her go

Her native blood runs with exotic passions
that are contained, with splashing water fall
cooling your emotions, scarlet changing stains

She floods your drowning heart and clings
with animal feelings, as deep as any alluring
oceans, with its icy cold rains

She feels good to your sweaty firey thoughts
with burning sultry fever flames

Why is she so different as she feeds
on your submissive brain and veins

She gently nibbles on your waiting
sensitive neck her flickering warm
tongue on your eager ears
always she pleases

With your warm red blood flowing
her soft lips are forever stained
as you romantically whisper
her tantalizing elusive name 

Then sharp fangs that penetrates even more
with pleasure to your main vein
as she makes wild love to you 
You will never be the same 


 Your hot blood and hers for all eternity
always the alluring restless nights
with vampire seductive winds
my captured friend

Then other helpless days and night
it rapture starts all over again


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Comment By: FreeJoseph Hensley on August 14, 2012 12:26:47 PM Report
love it  great poem
Comment By: FreeFirestone Feinberg on August 13, 2012 09:51:24 AM Report
(Vampires suck!)  ...A rare offering from you!  A bloody song -- mixed with your inimitable grace.  --David
Comment By: FreeTomahawk on August 13, 2012 08:12:08 AM Report

I think I need a cold shower after this one!



Comment By: PremiumHarry William Harborne on August 13, 2012 05:03:24 AM Report

Wow thats given me a good start to the day.


Bill harborne


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