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Author Name: Premiummazurekd 3 Comments
Date Added: August 21, 2012 19:08:30 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
Category: General/Word Banks Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
A Paltry Offering.......A Firestone Feinberg WBC
A Paltry Offering
 
Be still old stationery
were out of time.
  
A sad day to witness
a pen's final crawl.
 
Death jump in to dance
without my youth.
  
Life fill the inkwell  for
  pages from a tree.
  
Warm tears for the wise
in words left behind.
Author's Notes:
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAlistair Muir on August 23, 2012 04:55:18 AM Report
Once more your effortless prose casts magic onto the page -- superb simile and metaphor with exquisite visions -- another wonderful read Dan --



Alistair

Comment By: FreeTomahawk on August 22, 2012 06:13:54 PM Report


Good use of imagery here in this simple but fine work. Dan....you da man!


 


Len

Comment By: FreeFirestone Feinberg on August 22, 2012 09:56:32 AM Report
Dan this is an extraordinary poem.  A rare and special solution to the word-bank challenge.  I think it's different from anything you've written (that I've read) (?).  I so enjoy seeing how differently persons respond to the challenge -- it's such fun to watch.  Hope all is well, sir...  --David




 


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