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Author Name: Premiummazurekd 7 Comments
Date Added: August 27, 2012 18:08:23 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
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Hostage
I sat down alone with paper and pen.
And wonder when this would finally end.

The stillness of night weighs down the hand.
Time vanishes within a parcel of  land.

Rolling the red carpet out to you.
To retrieve all the words of blue.

To stir.

To create.

To awake.

To sensate.

To live.

To love.

To free a heart.

Author's Notes:
Where will all my secrets finally be?
If I stop to give everyone here a peek.

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAdri on September 3, 2012 08:53:22 AM Report
I can so relate. For me, poetry is opening your soul, but those who look in, see different sides of your secrets.
Adri 

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on August 29, 2012 04:05:34 PM Report
A little to esoteric for this hack, Dan...Seems like it's about summoning poetic inspiration, but I won't pretend to understand what I don't...Yer pal, len
Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on August 29, 2012 10:38:25 AM Report


...favorite line, "rolling the red carpet out to you".  this piece certainly speaks about you.  you are a compassionate soul...a true giver. 


I really like the way your poem takes shape.  it is a lamp...symbolically giving light....to free a heart.   nice job, Dan!

Comment By: FreeAlistair Muir on August 29, 2012 02:29:15 AM Report
Your poetry is unique -- touching and beautifully presented -- you always deliver such quality --



Alistair

Comment By: FreeFirestone Feinberg on August 28, 2012 09:31:52 AM Report
Great to see you again!  Beautiful poem.  Airy and light.  --David
Comment By: FreeTomahawk on August 27, 2012 07:36:53 PM Report


Secrets, eh? Hey Dan....do you know who killed Kennedy?


 


Len

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on August 27, 2012 06:55:25 PM Report


Mmmmm.... I think you have spoke out loud and clear....

 As poets sometimes we struggle with our emotions trying to find the words to express our emotions..

 I always enjoy your creative mind...When you write you don't hold anything back... *****

Your loyal fan....... Love ya! ~India






 


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