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Author Name: FreeSensual Sorceress 8 Comments
Date Added: September 13, 2012 19:09:27 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
Category: Love Add To Favorites | Text Only
Caramel Sin
The evening was a whirlwind -
we were all frenzied and taut,
bodies shaking and grinding
with none of those wasted moments
of precious and too little time.
Tomorrow would come, but tonight
my longing for you became a desire
to hold you close and press my lips
to your rich black-diamond skin.
I slipped my tongue into your wet
essence, delving into the dark
depths of your liquid delights.
My pulse quickened as your fluids
rushed over my palate 
like a Jamaican waterfall
of melted creamy caramel sin.
I swallowed the first crescendo of
satisfaction and reached for you
again and again and again,
until my need was sated
and I switched to decaf. 
Author's Notes:
Everyone needs a little taste now and then. :)
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Comment By: Freeguest_writer on March 15, 2013 10:02:00 AM Report

I gotta be honest I decided to read this because the title caught my eye. I love Caramel. LOL. I thought it was about the burnt sugar (I'm a wannabe foodie! ^^). I realized it was about something else.  This is my new favorite poem. So creative, sensual and beautifully written. I enjoyed reading it. I actually haven't read anything like it. 

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on September 16, 2012 05:38:36 PM Report
Never has so many erections owed so much to so few words....Yuuuummmmmmmmmm!!!....len
Comment By: PremiumHarry William Harborne on September 14, 2012 03:13:38 PM Report
You had me there for sure, I was reaching for my heart pills just as i got to that wonderful last line. I wrote one once about a chocolate eclair in a similar vane.  Great work.   Bill H
Comment By: FreeHenry M. on September 14, 2012 11:47:50 AM Report
Ummmmmm, coffee anyone? Or maybe some ice cream if you please? Excellent poem Jolen.   Hugs,  Henry
Comment By: FreeAdri on September 14, 2012 03:03:15 AM Report
That is true love...  How will YOU ever cope without some caffein  ;o)
You can seriously make anything sounds like... you know...  but I know you better LOL 


Comment By: FreeTomahawk on September 13, 2012 09:30:39 PM Report

This can get wood....and burn it down!



Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on September 13, 2012 08:58:57 PM Report

Goodness me!!  Let me catch my breath!!! 

I think I need some air and time to pour some red wine...


Comment By: PremiumKymberly Donn on September 13, 2012 07:47:29 PM Report
ROFL!!!!  I know you're twisted so I wasn't thinkin' what it sounded like, but I was on the ice cream sundae page! I love it!

Hugs~Cinders~Thinking about a bowl of ice cream now!


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