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Author Name: PremiumDr Fogg 4 Comments
Date Added: September 24, 2012 08:09:54 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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They Called Her October WBC 5 FF

 

 
 
 
They called her October

Probably because she was always shedding her clothes

Ever quick to drop her draws and give passers by a moon

Even the wise old owls in the trees were shocked

And suggested she should be arrested soon.

 

She was a Libra, astrologically speaking

Certainly in Orbit and rarely inclined to landing

Yet she took no drugs or alcohol, it was all within her

Quite a shock to her parents of impeccable standing.

 

When they were waltzing she was rock and rolling

Illuminating all around her in a silver glow of smiles

Come rain snow hurricane heat or cold

We celebrated just knowing her and her whiles

 

No serene scene could withstand her assault

She blasted in with her eternal laughter

And brought love and joy to all around

So I married her shortly after.
 
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Author's Notes:
Well done providing this challenge David, I used all the words in order!
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on September 25, 2012 10:33:46 AM Report
I loved the rocking and rollong part when her parents were waltzing..it really speaks for our generation.  we seemed to do everything wrong but we turned out fine, huh?  This is so enduring...what a clever imagination you have, perfect for the word bank.  It also helps put the antics of our children into proper. perspective.  youve written a totally delightful poem!
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on September 24, 2012 06:29:15 PM Report


Goodness me...outstanding.... This kinda takes ones breath.. Undressing October ..

 YOur so neet at this poem..Amazing what that mind of yours can think of!!

Comment By: FreeTomahawk on September 24, 2012 04:38:29 PM Report


Whoa....son! Does your wife know that? Cleverly done, Bill, most humerous....not the bone, but this. lol.


 


Len

Comment By: FreeFirestone Feinberg on September 24, 2012 02:38:12 PM Report
Absolutely delightful!  Pure Harborne.  I love it.  Perfect!   (And you get 'extra-credit' for using the words in order!)  --David




 


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