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Author Name: Freealiopterix 5 Comments
Date Added: September 28, 2012 08:09:15 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Dance With The Devil

Dance With The Devil

So you you know me so touch me I'm real come to me feel darkness; Dance with the Devil wild and free Succumb and feel the emptiness; The eternal void beckons you Embrace the solitude and pain Of love unanswered I am true But also Prince of Lies abstain
From your current and worthless life Be touched by suffering and loss; Life cannot be real without strife Enter the world of the soul-less; I'll catch you at your lowest point Adore me now my feet annoint...

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Comment By: FreeFirestone Feinberg on September 29, 2012 11:57:01 AM Report
Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on September 29, 2012 03:11:49 AM Report
To dance with the Devil conjures up all manner of thoughts does it not Alistair but those you have brought to the table deserve an applause fascinating indeed sir~Graham.
Comment By: Freee. Gene Myers on September 28, 2012 08:39:50 PM Report

Hard to refuse ??  Never.  Evidently I picked up on a line the others did not. 

"I am true  But also Prince of Lies ..."

This means every promise made is a lie.

Even the fact he promises he is a liar could be a lie.

The Devil will tell a thousand truths just to slip in one lie.

You can bet, YOU WILL be the loser.

I'd refuse in a heartbeat.


Comment By: PremiumShawn on September 28, 2012 10:07:56 AM Report

Such a seductive dance-hard to refuse. Great write.



Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on September 28, 2012 09:38:25 AM Report
Alistair:  quite an invite; very well played.  And of course, when you dance with the Devil the Devil doesn't change !!!!

Lady D


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