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Author Name: PremiumByronBabe 13 Comments
Date Added: October 11, 2012 22:10:45 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Shooting Star
In the back of your mind
you know it's her not me,
she's your grand adventure
the place you need to be.
This woman of your waking world
she caught your thoughts from the start,
and now slowly, ever so slowly
she has captured your heart.
Don't deny it, for I know it's true
it's in your voice when you say her name,
look in the mirror, at your eyes
if they could speak would sound the same.
My one and only regret is this
we will never know how far
that together you and I
could ride this shooting star.
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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumDan J. Mazurek on July 25, 2013 12:23:51 PM Report

another a look i am a sucker for shooting stars/.

 

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on January 14, 2013 11:59:31 AM Report
Let's see...A shooting star lasts approx. one second....That ties my old record.. Hee hee...Hi, Gypsy....Longt time...len
Comment By: FreeSensual Sorceress on November 29, 2012 01:54:19 AM Report
Now here's one I can relate to. Beautifully said. 
Comment By: FreeMike on October 13, 2012 12:08:09 PM Report
Very good!
Comment By: PremiumLinda Jo on October 12, 2012 10:47:39 PM Report


sad but convincing...that old mirror...it tells the truth, always.  you are brave and rather objective over a very emotional situation.  hats off to you for being strong...and wow! your poetry comes across strong as well.


 

Comment By: PremiumBlake Hightdudis on October 12, 2012 05:03:27 PM Report


Wonderful sad wirte.


Comment By: PremiumDan J. Mazurek on October 12, 2012 02:10:03 PM Report


 Kymberly your a super nova


creating a new world of poetry here.

Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on October 12, 2012 12:50:43 PM Report
Sad, romantic and terrific! Nice Kym, really nice!
Comment By: FreeFirestone Feinberg on October 12, 2012 12:36:28 PM Report
Beautiful and sad.  I guess that's part of what love poetry is.  Hope it's not 'true.'  Love, David
Comment By: FreeTomahawk on October 12, 2012 08:25:10 AM Report


Very poignant and tender. A wonderful piece, Kym, you write with your heart, like very few can or will.


 


Len

Comment By: FreeAdri on October 12, 2012 02:56:51 AM Report
A lot of longing and sadness in this poem. The feeling is carried over to the reader very well. 
Well written piece

Adri 

Comment By: FreeAlistair Muir on October 12, 2012 12:07:55 AM Report
Lovely words Kymberly -- a fine piece of writing --



Alistair

Comment By: Freeken on October 11, 2012 11:31:54 PM Report
Love is a tender friend even as it slowly unravels the fabric of our souls.



You step right into the heart of the mater with your first line yet rather then express anger or jealousy, the easy path, you travel with truth and the sadness of loss.



A brave endeavor



ken






 


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