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Author Name: FreeTomahawk 6 Comments
Date Added: October 14, 2012 11:10:25 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
Category: Haiku Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Windsong
I walk in beauty, I experience but you
through fields of amber, I feel you here
you blow through my distant memory
your song stays with me, enchants me, so
 
My long raven hair catches your message
blowing like the winter wheat, it flows
you gently whisper your intent to my ear
O,' but what do you truly know of me?
 
You scatter the chaff and the tumble weed
my linen dress waves in the wayward wind
bare, my feet and soul, your lovely song
I close my eyes, feel reborn at your hand
 
What secrets do you know, what, therein?
I am but a woman/child, in years to you
flourish 'neath you, your melodious whisper
phasing languished, in sweet evanescence
 
O', but if I could only float along in you
to know what you know of our earth mother
how she is in all of us, her message in song
and you....the conduit of our possibilities
 
You and your magnificent windsong....
 
 
 
 
 
 
Author's Notes:
A Native American gender bender, in sky blue. A young maiden discovers secrets of the windsong. 
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAdri on October 15, 2012 03:38:51 AM Report
As Barbara said, very descriptive and so well written. 
Amazing 

Adri 

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on October 14, 2012 07:29:15 PM Report
Delightfully descriptive! 



~Barbara D.~


Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on October 14, 2012 04:50:30 PM Report
"the conduit of our possibilities"...very profound phrase. yes, every line is exquisite!  You must have a very well-rounded muse...both genders have a strong voice.  This poem has a very ancient feel...so you have traveled through the multi-generational plane as well.  Nice job!
Comment By: PremiumHOPE on October 14, 2012 12:44:39 PM Report
Len
Wow, it's been a while since I've been here and my have you grown!  Lol I am just floored by this beautiful poem. At first I didn't see the female only.  The long hair reminded me of your native ancestry   Not until the four stanza but still I could feel the feminine side of you.  Not that you are a woman but we all possess these qualities.  I am amazed by such splendid writing.  Write on!

Love

Hope

Comment By: FreeFirestone Feinberg on October 14, 2012 12:35:57 PM Report
This is spectacular.  How brilliant of you to write from the feminine side.  What original thinking! (Not unusual for you.)  --David
Comment By: FreeKymberly Donn on October 14, 2012 11:55:02 AM Report
This is beautiful Len. It feels light and lilting all the way through. Well done!



~KD~





 


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