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Comment By:  Leonard Wilson on April 16, 2013 01:56:51 PM |
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I love the concept of the sky speaking with weather, Niece.....Short, and lovely, kid....len
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| Comment By: Henry M. on October 26, 2012 02:32:35 PM |
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I think you aced it Kym, excellent poem. Hugs, Henry
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Comment By:  Dan J. Mazurek on October 16, 2012 07:16:20 PM |
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Well the leaves had been torned from my paper.
Now on the floor to be swept away
after reading this.
Very good effort I tip my hat to the lady.
nice work.
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| Comment By: ken on October 15, 2012 01:37:27 PM |
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Very concise!
peace ken
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| Comment By: Barbara Demasson on October 14, 2012 06:28:26 PM |
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It sure does! These are so short but really grab one's attention. You know we could always use these again to start or put into other poems. Sometime that is all we need to get us on our way. I will probably do that. Enjoyed!
~Barbara D.~
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| Comment By: Linda Jo on October 14, 2012 04:40:44 PM |
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...brrrr I feel autumn within your words. very nice!
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| Comment By: HOPE on October 14, 2012 02:18:12 PM |
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Oooh, this is simple, short and beautiful! Way to go!
Love
Hope
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| Comment By: Firestone Feinberg on October 14, 2012 02:07:48 PM |
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Divine!
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