Today Is: Sunday, February 28, 2021 04:51 AM. Our Topic of the Week: Memories
Questions?

Check our Help area first!

Comments? Suggestions?

Contact us now!

We like hearing feedback from members on how to improve the site!
 
 
 


 
Author Name: PremiumByronBabe 11 Comments
Date Added: October 18, 2012 21:10:47 Average Score: (Needs 2)
Views This Week
Members: 0
Unique Members: 0
Guests: 291
Total Views
Members: 24
Unique Members: 24
Guests: 1119

Type: Unspecified
Category: General Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Silent Sentinel...A Trijan Refrain

Silently the sentinel stands

ancient limbs like strong arms 

peace found beneath his loving hands 

comfort attained not harms 

in that meadow so warm and sweet 

generations laid at his feet

in that meadow

in that meadow

played in the midst of summer heat


Silently the sentinel stands

aged boughs tempt divine dreams 

amidst sprawling acres of land 

games made of childish schemes 

reveling in brilliant sunlight

climbers head to the highest height

reveling in

reveling in

aspiring to take winged flight


Silently the sentinel stands

antique branch creak with age

price for meeting youthful demands

grow harder on this sage

on lonesome knoll he watches still

waiting with graceful whippoorwill

on lonesome knoll

on lonesome knoll

for more reveries to fulfill

Author's Notes:
My first attempt at a Trijan Refrain. I was introduced to this form by Ken aka meaningless. It was a challenge, but it was fun.
Report Offensive Poem.

'Silent Sentinel...A Trijan Refrain' Copyright © Kymberly Donn
Copyright is property of the above author or group. Reproduction in whole or in part is strictly prohibited.
Click here if you feel this poem is in violation of a copyright.
 
Click here to send this poem to someone!

Comments:
Comment By: FreeBrian Dziokonski on March 8, 2013 03:41:29 PM Report
Congratulations! It is a powerful and epic masterpiece indeed, Bravo, Brian
Comment By: PremiumLindaM on March 8, 2013 01:52:43 AM Report

I wasn't on the CP site back when this poem was published. As I read it now

it is very clear why it won the featured contest. Congratulations on a well deserved win.

Linda

Comment By: FreeFirestone Feinberg on March 7, 2013 07:33:29 AM Report
CONGRATULATIONS!  YOU DESERVE IT.  GREAT POEM!   --David
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on March 6, 2013 08:24:09 PM Report

Kymberly: congratulations for the Feature Poem Award.  Great write, as always. 

 

Lady D

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on October 20, 2012 01:08:59 PM Report
This is really pro stuff, niece....Just beautiful....len
Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on October 19, 2012 07:37:42 PM Report
WOW! Terrific piece of writing!
Comment By: PremiumShawn on October 19, 2012 05:42:25 PM Report

Yes, Kym, awesome job. Has a feeling of melancholy whimsy. This is great!

 

Shawn

Comment By: FreeFirestone Feinberg on October 19, 2012 10:49:07 AM Report
I totally agree with Henry.  This is awesome!  I think the special form of this poem really suits you.  Beautiful!  --David
Comment By: FreeHenry M. on October 18, 2012 10:20:22 PM Report
Kym, this is excellent, you've outdone yourself on this one.   Hugs,   Henry
Comment By: FreeTomahawk on October 18, 2012 10:14:19 PM Report


Great job, Kym, I learned to do this from Ken, also. This is a real challenge and you met it, my friend.


 


Len

Comment By: Freeken on October 18, 2012 09:45:49 PM Report


I want to meet this guardian and watch my daughter poke

her head out the very top the way Bilbo Baggins did in Mirkwood forest

A wonderful use and presentation of this form.



peace ken






 


Check for Announcements.
on our Home page!

User poems are sometimes graced by images and textures stored on our site
courtesy of GRSites.com, Sandy Hradil, and Sherri Emily.


Welcome, Guest!

Become part of our
friendly community
of on-line writers!

Join today!
 
Username:
 
Password:
 
Forget Username or Password?

Members On Line: 0
Guests On Line: 94
Members in Chat: 0


Happy Birthday


 
We Thank You!

For your donations
and subscriptions!

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
monovalent-defence
Copyright © 2003-2021 Creative-Poems.com.  All Rights Reserved. Use of this site is subject to certain
Terms of Service rules which constitute a legal agreement between you and Creative-Poems.com.
By providing links to other sites, Creative-Poems.com neither approves of, endorses, or gurantees
any information, opinions, or products found on those sites. Users follow links at their own risk.