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Author Name: FreeJakeInAZ 4 Comments
Date Added: October 23, 2012 04:10:53 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
Category: Love/Fantasies Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Just a Boy

Just a boy was I then with the heart of a man

Just a kiss we did share; just a flash in the pan

Just a moment did pass but a lifetime I felt

Just to feel her that close; just to watch the world melt

 

Just a boy with a dream that she filled for a time

Just a breath, just a word, just an instant; sublime

Just like a deer; frozen in the light of her eyes

I just stood there swimming as she skipped the goodbyes

 

Just a boy was I then but I felt fully grown

Just the touch of her lips and I sank like a stone

Just a kiss; Just a kiss; Just a glorious kiss

Just to feel her that close left me feeling like this

 

Just a boy, still nave, I did my best to play cool

Just a chance, come and went, now I feel like a fool

Just like a shooting star across the midnight skies

I just stood there, mid-wish, as she skipped the goodbyes

 

Just a boy was I then but I know better now

Just a flash, just a dream, just an unspoken vow

Just a moment did pass but a lifetime it seemed

Just to feel her that close; just to relive that dream

Author's Notes:
Been ages since I posted anything...so when this came to be I decided I'd post it. A bit contrived I suppose.

Thanks to Dennis for donating my membership! Glad to have a reason to come back and post!
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Comments:
Comment By: FreePaige Nicole Wilkinson on October 25, 2012 11:22:08 PM Report
This is great baby! I'm glad to see you're inspired again:) 
Comment By: FreePaige Nicole Wilkinson on October 25, 2012 11:21:32 PM Report


Comment By: Freee. Gene Myers on October 23, 2012 10:14:33 AM Report
I really like this.  However, for me there is no "Just a" . Everything has its purpose in life, if nothing more than giving a poet something to write about, a combining of ones thoughts into a single script,  The hidden meaning within you words shines like a sun filled mirror in ones eyes.
Great poem .... think I'll put it in my favorites

Gene

Comment By: FreeAdri on October 23, 2012 04:50:32 AM Report
Very well written, I like the repetition. Nice flow. 
Adri 





 


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