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Author Name: PremiumBrokenBeast 7 Comments
Date Added: October 29, 2012 11:10:38 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Ghostly Past
Darkness,
Ever encroaching,
Enshrouded by past.
I walk.


My Light,
Precious.
I am steadfast.


Author's Notes:
Okay here goes another one. I actually used a form this time-hopefully not incorrectly.
Septolet- 14 words, 7 lines...produces a picture( that's my worry, too little-to much )


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Comments:
Comment By: FreeFirestone Feinberg on October 30, 2012 11:23:07 AM Report
I love short poems!  this is terrific.  Keep experimenting -- please!  --David
Comment By: FreeAlistair Muir on October 30, 2012 12:14:51 AM Report
Bold experimentation -- you produce thought and feeling with this excellent write -- bravo!



Alistair

Comment By: Freee. Gene Myers on October 29, 2012 10:09:45 PM Report
I see all kinds of images from this ... a couple not wanting to split, but each unwilling to change for the other ... a man dead set in his ways, being challenged but remaining set in his ways .... My God,  Proud of His one Son, but not so with another ... and on and on and on .... it must be right, It presents images very well and each of us probably sees a different picture in their own mind.  These were just some of mine ... There are more.  Many more
Gene

Comment By: PremiumHarry William Harborne on October 29, 2012 05:57:56 PM Report
Yes the word steadfast says it all, positive, determined, a winner (You and the poem)     Bill
Comment By: FreeAdri on October 29, 2012 05:22:24 PM Report
No, this works perfectly. Beautiful poetry!  
Adri 

Comment By: FreeJohn Armlovich on October 29, 2012 03:54:23 PM Report


But living in the darkness is so much more fun than the light..... ;-) just kidding. I too see a person stepping forth from the darkness of uncertainty and pain into a future lit with the light of love and life.  Well done my friend,


John

Comment By: Freeken on October 29, 2012 12:29:05 PM Report
Very interesting. :)

I see an image of one who is determined

to step out of the darkness - to take control.



very positive while skirting negative.



I like.

peace

ken






 


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