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Author Name: Premiummazurekd 8 Comments
Date Added: January 10, 2013 13:01:01 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
Category: Inspirational Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Rays of Hope
The moon looked like one lone polka dot
dressing that black sky today.  

Let my sad world eclipse that light away

a pessimist would say. 

Well moonbeam lets together enlighten

 a travelerís gloomy ways.   

For to see past the night there has to be

 lights with its aural of rays.

Author's Notes:

I am actually looking forward this year to see a better tomorrow.

Over there is milk and honey but here is but the bread of sorrow.

 

 

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Comment By: FreeWide Awake on July 13, 2013 03:28:17 PM Report
Very pretty images and lovely thoughts Dan. :o)



Pamela


Comment By: Freemaggie lopez sherry wilbur on March 15, 2013 11:27:26 AM Report
this is a clever and seemingly delicate write. len put it in a good way the future isnt written yet we make our own destinies and  live for today in case the morrow should never wake. you cant change the past and the future isnt garunteed so live for today. with a smile . a smile warms the hearts around you and chases clouds away. your smile is that moon. always maggie.
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on January 11, 2013 08:14:08 PM Report
Ever since the first A-bomb was dropped, fearing the future has been a way of life. To a lesser degree, it probably has ever been so. All we have is today. It has ever been, and will always be NOW. We need to embrace the now and rejoice in it...len
Comment By: FreeFirestone Feinberg on January 10, 2013 08:19:54 PM Report
You have a beautiful and natural honesty.  This poem exemplifies this.  It is a refreshing thing and always cheers me.  --David 
Comment By: FreeBrian Dziokonski on January 10, 2013 06:13:45 PM Report
Cool and clever poem Dan, Brian.
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on January 10, 2013 01:43:14 PM Report


WE all must have a better year .. We all get tangled up with sorrow and fear...

 may happiness kiss your romantic heart with joy .... No more unhappiness the mind will be annoyed ..

 Hugs and Love ~ She Whispers

Comment By: ModeratorHenry M. on January 10, 2013 01:21:48 PM Report
I hope your message brings the inspiration to each reader just as it did to me dan, this is wonderful.   Henry
Comment By: FreeAdri on October 30, 2012 07:33:00 AM Report
I like the first two lines the most. 
Lovely write. 

Adri 





 


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