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Author Name: Premiummazurekd 6 Comments
Date Added: November 01, 2012 07:11:23 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
Category: Adventure Team Challenges/Shotgun Word Bank Poems/Week 1 Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Distinguished Bearings.........Shot Gun WBC
Popularity is seen with a few eyes as
only a lame disguise.
Let's reveal why people choose lies
when they're criticized.
For a falcon will falter though united
 in killing its prey.
While a beloved touch reminds failure
to just back away.
A supple mind is a baluster for stairs
 that never will sway.
Author's Notes:
 (Wedding LOL)
Shot Gun!!!!! 
 WORD BANK:
 falter falcon beloved  *pop* baluster supple  eyes  disguise  united  touch  reveal
thanks ken
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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumHarry William Harborne on November 4, 2012 04:47:53 PM Report
Challenge aside this was a breathtaking poem. You have my attention.    Bill
Comment By: FreeFirestone Feinberg on November 2, 2012 11:53:46 AM Report
Beautiful as always, Dan!  Missed you.  --David
Comment By: Freee. Gene Myers on November 2, 2012 08:35:22 AM Report
I like this and I like Ken's comment.  Are we popular because of what we do or do we do things to gain a popularity we do not deserve?  Why .... we do things in life determines how we appear to others in life.  Are we doing them for the correct purposes?
Very thought provoking

Gene

Comment By: FreeAlistair Muir on November 2, 2012 12:51:24 AM Report
Artful and exquisitely penned no less -- wonderful use of words and language -- great job --



Alistair

Comment By: Freeken on November 1, 2012 06:47:26 PM Report
I think like most things in life there are 2 sides here

there is popularity for acts of kindness

and acts of kindness for popularity

the trouble is to know which is which?



very well done Dan



peace

ken


Comment By: FreeAdri on November 1, 2012 08:27:16 AM Report
Great answer to the challenge. Great piece 
Adri 





 


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