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Author Name: PremiumByronBabe 10 Comments
Date Added: November 02, 2012 16:11:20 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
Category: Adventure Team Challenges/Shotgun Word Bank Poems/Week 1 Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Falcon Fire...Shotgun Word Bank

The enemy marches 

men and horses

road appears supple

lies to well trained eyes


Upon the wall

beloved commander

before the populace 

undisguised


Against baluster

leaning, unafraid

refusing to falter

keeping men united


Beyond the gate

a touch to a wick

simple spark reveals

power of falcon fire

Author's Notes:
Falcon here is a small light weight cannon.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeRobin Constantinou on December 14, 2012 09:31:26 AM Report
I can feel the marching of warriors soldiering on, flying shrapnel, and blood spilt through this piece. Thanks for sharing. 
Comment By: PremiumHarry William Harborne on November 4, 2012 04:42:46 PM Report
You have started this c hallenge off with quite a bang! well done~ Bill
Comment By: PremiumShawn on November 4, 2012 02:13:13 PM Report
Awesome Kim. I really like how you used " falcon " , unique and unexpected.



Shawn

Comment By: PremiumDan J. Mazurek on November 4, 2012 09:23:28 AM Report


and we are getting ready here for another civil war re-enactment.


Kim you always lead the general population here with wonderment.

Comment By: Freeken on November 2, 2012 11:53:12 PM Report
I love the use of "lies" as what appears "supple," " unfaltering" and "united" are about the taste an unexpected bit,



great job

ken


Comment By: FreeFirestone Feinberg on November 2, 2012 06:24:40 PM Report
Surely an explosive offering!  Great use of words, Kym.  Dynamite poem!  --David
Comment By: PremiumLinda Jo on November 2, 2012 05:29:28 PM Report
these challenges are turning up some very creative poems.  Yours was so full of wonderful images...a few words but it presents a big picture!  "road appears supple" ...loved that image!  great job, very creative!
Comment By: FreeHenry M. on November 2, 2012 05:23:58 PM Report
Challenge well met and conquered by you Kym, I loved how you used the "pop" very cleverly done.  Hugs,   Henry
Comment By: FreeTomahawk on November 2, 2012 04:36:04 PM Report


Just saw this, very clever and well written, Kym, you are amazing!


 


Len

Comment By: FreeAdri on November 2, 2012 04:08:51 PM Report
Very interesting and very well written. 

Adri 




 


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