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Author Name: Premiummazurekd 8 Comments
Date Added: November 06, 2012 10:11:51 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
Category: Love Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Eternity’s Grip
For love.
 
Eternity waits.
  
Within the palm
of
a hand.
  
Watching the walls
around my sand castle
give in  to your surf.
  
I wait with the ocean
to see if the tide
returns  a hand print.
 
Time doesn't hesitate
 for
even one breath.
 
Was that touch
 really
from the heart?

Make no mistake!

 

 
Make no mistake!
 
Was that touch
really
from the heart?
 
Time doesn't hesitate
 for
even one breath.
 
I wait with the ocean
 to see if the tide
 returns a hand print.
  
Watching the walls
around my sand castle
give in  to your surf.
  
Within the palm
of
a hand.

Eternity waits.

For love.

Author's Notes:
For the love of writing poetry.
And the love shown in encouraging me always to write.
To try even something new.
Thank you Pamela.
A high five for you
in a hand print.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on November 7, 2012 06:48:48 PM Report


You always write so beautiful.... A pleasure indeed..

 The lady is so talented no-one holds a candle to her...

 But now look what you did... breathless....

Comment By: Freeemma jane on November 6, 2012 11:48:29 PM Report

Time doesn't hesitate

 for

even one breath.

 

Love this line!

Comment By: PremiumHarry William Harborne on November 6, 2012 05:44:22 PM Report
Well crafted and a joy to read.   Bill
Comment By: Freetonya turner on November 6, 2012 05:25:59 PM Report
Beautiful. Good write.
Comment By: FreeAdri on November 6, 2012 03:18:47 PM Report
This is marvelous. I really enjoyed it. A feast to read and see 
Adri 

Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on November 6, 2012 03:09:23 PM Report


Dan, incredible job here!  This poem wouldn't have been as meaningful... nor as touching if the verses were not repeated.  Wonderful!  I love the referenced to sand...such a lovely picture of "transient".  The Oriental have as part of their definition of beauty...that which is transient.  So true...


Comment By: FreeFirestone Feinberg on November 6, 2012 12:27:30 PM Report
This mirror-image poem is marvelous.  It just 'works.'  A joy to read, Dan.  --David
Comment By: PremiumShawn on November 6, 2012 10:54:16 AM Report
Dan, this is beautiful. Filled with such longing and hope. Great job with the form.
Also, I like the nod to Pamela. She is a sweetheart and does encourage--most appreciated.




Shawn





 


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