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Author Name: Premiumsheedreams 7 Comments
Date Added: November 07, 2012 21:11:22 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
Category: Adventure Team Challenges/Poetry Form Challenges/Week 2: Form Challenge - Triolet Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Time
 
 
A banquet spread beyond the hands of time
Where Love finds nourishment devouring fate.
While forever green speaks from distant pines
A banquet spead beyond the hands of time.
A glint of aspen's gold appears to shine
And peers into the night where clues await.
A banquet spread beyond the hands of time
Where Love finds nourishment devouring fate.
 
 
 
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Comment By: Freejohn carter on June 10, 2016 04:18:15 PM Report

nourishment devouring time. superb! J0hn
Comment By: PremiumTristan on July 17, 2014 12:30:35 PM Report

Linda Jo:  This is a beautiful reversal of a set of lines I remember from another 'time.'  You capture beautifully the moment and cause the reader to desire that banquet offered in the night, spread with love and devouring the fate that would turn on it.  You choose your words as colors of the heart and so invite a sensual enchantment to the moment...  in Triolet, iambic pentameter and beautiful rhymes, this is very nicely done.  With love,  Tristan

 

 




Comment By: FreeHanane on June 23, 2014 01:37:15 PM Report

Dear Sheedreams, I did really miss you and all my friends in creative poems. Well done. I like your poem: I did enjoy it, especially when you said:

 A banquet spread beyond the hands of time

Where Love finds nourishment devouring fate. just brilliant!

 

Han




Comment By: FreeFirestone Feinberg on November 8, 2012 08:29:38 AM Report
A true triolet.  Touching and serene.  Interesting yet mysterious.  Splendid!  --David
Comment By: PremiumHarry William Harborne on November 8, 2012 06:45:12 AM Report
Actualy I suspect a lot of effort went into this, and it shows. Well done.Bill
Comment By: FreeAdri on November 8, 2012 01:11:00 AM Report
Fantastic, awe inspiring poetry. You do this without any effort. 
Just fantastic 

Adri 

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on November 7, 2012 10:06:42 PM Report


 You have done it again dear lady..another awesome poem one can relate too!!

 So many poets now with this style... 





 


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