Sky by Linda Jo

		Author Name: sheedreams	6 Comments
		Date Added: November 08, 2012 22:11:32	Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming

Category: Adventure Team Challenges/Poetry Form Challenges/Week 2: Form Challenge - Triolet

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Sky

Three beauties share the early morning sky;

A cloud, a rainbow, and a dawning moon.

Of these three ladies only one is shy.

Three beauties share the early morning sky.

White strands, gray shades, and icy blue comply;

Sheer curtains draped over silver sand dunes.

Three beauties share the early morning sky...

A cloud, a rainbow, and a dawning moon.

Author's Notes:

My second attempt at the French form, Triolet ...each line 10 syllables.

taken from my original poem, A Moment of Luxury.

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Comments:

	Comment By: Hanane on July 8, 2014 12:36:04 PM	Report
	Oh Dear Linda! I did really miss your poems and the nice atmosphere in creative-poems. Wonderful, beautiful and sweet...BRAVO Hannane Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Harry William Harborne on November 9, 2012 07:39:28 PM	Report
	Bravo and standing ovation (I'm really still sitting down but i mean it)........................Bill. Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Shawn on November 9, 2012 03:56:05 PM	Report
	I bet that was a beautiful site to see. I like how you incorporated your beauties into the form. Shawn Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Firestone Feinberg on November 9, 2012 10:54:03 AM	Report
	This is beautiful and I think this form was meant for you! --David Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Lady Dragonwyck on November 9, 2012 07:35:27 AM	Report
	Linda Jo: well I certainly could see these "lovelies" as I enjoyed my morning creamy coffee. And you surely got me with a Nature write. Really enjoying your writes. Lady D Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Adri on November 9, 2012 04:13:33 AM	Report
	Well this is just awesome. (I am using that a lot these days to describe your work) It is a poem that speaks to you, whispering in soft hues. Lovely Adri Respond To This Comment