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Author Name: Premiumsheedreams 6 Comments
Date Added: November 08, 2012 22:11:32 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
Category: Adventure Team Challenges/Poetry Form Challenges/Week 2: Form Challenge - Triolet Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Sky
 
 

Three beauties share the early morning sky;

A cloud, a rainbow, and a dawning moon.
Of these three ladies only one is shy.
Three beauties share the early morning sky.
White strands, gray shades, and icy blue comply;
Sheer curtains draped over silver sand dunes.
Three beauties share the early morning sky...
 
A cloud, a rainbow, and a dawning moon.
 
 
 
 
                                                            
Author's Notes:
My second attempt at the French form, Triolet ...each line 10 syllables.
taken from my original poem, A Moment of Luxury. 
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeHanane on July 8, 2014 12:36:04 PM Report

Oh Dear Linda! I did really miss your poems and the nice atmosphere in creative-poems.

Wonderful, beautiful and sweet...BRAVO

 

Hannane

Comment By: PremiumHarry William Harborne on November 9, 2012 07:39:28 PM Report
Bravo and standing ovation (I'm really still sitting down but i mean it)........................Bill.
Comment By: PremiumShawn on November 9, 2012 03:56:05 PM Report

I bet that was a beautiful site to see. I like how you incorporated your beauties into the form.

 

Shawn

Comment By: FreeFirestone Feinberg on November 9, 2012 10:54:03 AM Report
This is beautiful and I think this form was meant for you!  --David
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on November 9, 2012 07:35:27 AM Report
Linda Jo:  well I certainly could see these "lovelies" as I enjoyed my morning creamy coffee.  And you surely got me with a Nature write.  Really enjoying your writes.  



Lady D

Comment By: FreeAdri on November 9, 2012 04:13:33 AM Report
Well this is just awesome. (I am using that a lot these days to describe your work) 

It is a poem that speaks to you, whispering in soft hues. 
Lovely 

Adri 





 


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