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Author Name: Freealiopterix 3 Comments
Date Added: January 11, 2013 07:01:24 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
Category: Love Add To Favorites | Text Only
Just You

Just You

Your lips they part I feel your breath

So close yet touch they not my face;

Your eyes intent as facing death

So regal my heart beats apace;

Your hair cascades about my cheeks

So lustrous fine a velvet kiss;

Your mind to my mind eager seeks

So wonderful much more than this;

Your body moves so sensually

My loins afire my passion soars;

Your thighs meet mine now rhythmically

I feel my voice burst forth it roars;

Your spirit meets with mine and thus

We blend as one so wondrous...

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Comment By: FreeDean on January 12, 2013 04:36:47 AM Report
Alistair, Alistair, Alistair.... can we have more of this please... totally amazing. ~Dean
Comment By: FreeFirestone Feinberg on January 11, 2013 09:04:34 AM Report
A perfectly perfect love song.  Exciting and passionate.  Good reading. --David
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on January 11, 2013 08:13:48 AM Report
Ali:  very romantic.   Nicely done.   

Lady D


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